Review by NS
A much better attempt compared to the previous one. However I prefer longer and more indepth ones.
Load [10/10]:
Loaded really quickly, and I was happy not to be waiting around.
First [9/10]:
I first noticed the ladybug image and I thought it was so cute! The green colour also stood out, but nothing else really grabbed my attention.
So, is it a good thing that the green stood out?
Look [9/10]:
I think your layout is really great and original in the way of the image, but maybe a little less original in the way the text is set up, with the sidebar, etc. But I think it is hard to avoid the sidebar thing so I'm not taking off points for that. I like the setup of the Navigation and the descriptions of each of the parts of your site.
Stuff [19/20]:
Your descriptions and words are really well selected, and I enjoy reading your stuff simply because it's written differently to most things. Your content about you alone is really interesting; you justify your reasons for not having a lot of content about yourself, and that's great. You also offer some really good stuff for your visitor, including a lot of original subpages. I'll definitely be returning later for some tips. Again your site info is very informative and interesting, a lot of reading to do but it kept me interested and kept reading. To draw a comparison, your site is like Dan Brown's "The Da Vinci Code" - I know I'm tired, I know I need sleep, but I can't stop reading!
So I lost points because there's a lot to read?
Muck-ups [9/10]:
The only mistake I spotted was under "Bribery", where you've used the word "esthetically". The correct spelling is "aesthetically". Other than that, no errors.
Yours? [9/10]:
In terms of content, you're way up there with originality. I didn't find ANYTHING that I haven't seen on another site before. In terms of layout, however, it's a little like other layouts I've seen (sidebar and all), but you've used it really well.
Conclusion [18/20]:
I really love your site and I'm definitely going to return. (I'll also apologise again for the last review - it was nowhere near as thorough as it should have been). I really enjoyed surfing your site =D
